to many ups and downs dude
Your flow is falling off from where it was. Your pace is starting to suck again. And it seemed like you were struggling on this track kid.
to many ups and downs dude
Your flow is falling off from where it was. Your pace is starting to suck again. And it seemed like you were struggling on this track kid.
dno wut u mean, seems fine 2 me
it made my ears bleed
You've been 0 bombed.
Thank You.
Haha
Muthafucking Monk
lmao
....
damn..you got ripped
ya moms
the only thing that throws this beat off
Is the guitar. You gotta learn how to push buttons faster on your damn keyboard!
Haha.
And wheres the hi hats and the crunchy breaks :P
But its hott. Shoulda had a bass guitar in there for the drop to the verse.
But hey its your beat not mine lol.
Haha, man, I liked the slow guitar. But apparently I need to speed shit up. I'll try something faster next time.
Hats are there, guess they need to be louder. And a bass isn't a bad idea lol
if it aint broke dont fix it lol
You got this win homie. The beat and you flow fits together nicely. The only downside to it is your backdrop vocals were a tad loud. Other then that this was proballi ur illest rack ever.
word, lmao shits mad loud, but w.e I was tryin 2 make the pop sounds heard. lol I forgot bout it. But ye thanks man=)
Sounds like..
It was a heavy burden to make lol
I love this song dude.
The hook almost brought tears to my eyes :)
This needs sum serious radio play right here.
Great job on the mixing burly
And nice lyrics as always guys.
Keep it up.
THIS IS REAL HIP HOP!
Thanks for the review. Man, I'm glad that we got the emotions across man. Like I said in the Authors Comments, a lot of people will be able to relate to this track. Keep dropping your own tracks too, you have plenty talent so don't waste it. Stay up.
Emcee Much?
well the beat was nice.
Thats all I could realli hear haha. Lyrics read in my head though.
There ok as well.
more meanin than punches, but ye this shit fucked up, lol at least its the thought that counts
so this is what you were working on all night
Nice good shit. I could seriously hear spawn or myself sampling this and making it nasty-r lol. Good shit dude. Keep it up. Next time do sum hip hop lol
haha, sample it. Go for it dude
Dude the lyrics are nicee
But you gotta get your flow down. And i could barely understand you 5o% of the track, idk if its the mic or the way it was EQd.
but im pretty sure with a little more time and effort on this track it would be hot as shit.
Keep at it forrealz, you can write.
Monk
4.34 / 5.00 (- 0.021) =/
thanks man! glad you think my lyrics are dope :)
Inside every cynical person, there is a disappointed idealist.
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Gotham City, PA
Joined on 10/29/07