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wtf was that?
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wtf was that?
retractable pussy
wtf is a fap
it sounds like something two fat people do when having sex.
Anyways...the track..the melody was ok
that saw thing that pops in at 0:10.5 wasnt needed through the whole thing. U shouldve dropped it off like 4 bars in. Sounds like you were using trance/techno kicks imo. And your snare/clap had too much bass behind it (again imo)
otherwyze it was an ok track.
lol at spelling of otherwise. Personally, I like that saw there, my preference. Too much bass? Man, there's just no pleasing you :p .
Thanks for the review dude
ehh
sounds like something you would listen to in war games on the web lol
I like that synth solo that comes in at 1:40. Its pretty ill imo.
Your drums could pack a lil more punch..since im black I like duh bass lol.
Other then that It was pretty nice.
Glad you agreed with me on the synth solo. Thing gave me the chills when I first heard it.
As for the drums, ya, I probably should have put more into it. Thanks for pointing that out
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Icon you can go to hell. I hate you and im gunna come to you house and we can play xbox haha
Omg iTz NaySly! Back at it. Glad to have you back man. You gotta hop on a track with Team BlackHouse soon man. And BN is trash. Like proballi the worst emcee ever. And if i was his girlfriend Id leave his ass. Nah. fuck that id shank him lol. Im hype as shit im about to start saying random shit n***a. Ima go to BNs house and beat him with a rubber chicken filled with soap n***a! Cause im the baddest n***a. Ima savage n***a lol. Bye Bye BN :P
-Monk
Lol! rubber chickens....
Hell yeah, man. I told you once I got this mic it was goin' to be on! So holla at me with some beats!
im agreeing with IG on this
the thing you need to work on is just a little bit more pace. not alot though
and spicen up your verses with adlibs and make parts stand out more. And the courus was nice but just needed a little more push to get the point across
other then that i found it a nice track. Great subject and the beat fit it perfectly
Thanks dude, I'l work on that
my n***a la yinn
LAYIN IT IN YO FACEE!!!! GIT WITH IT PEOPLE!! THIS MAN IT A BEAST!!! Thats how hype this song makes me Layinnn. Besides the cardboard bass. Which you fixed.
idk.
to me it seemed like your tri's where off key. Just the lowest key was the one that was throwing me off.
I really dont know how to review an ambient track haha.
The pad/synth what ever you used in the background was nice. I wouldve went with something lighter imo. But hey its not my track lol.
Your highest key you shouldve turned up about 4-5db cause your lows were over powering it. Other then that it was a ok track.
-Monk
thanks for your feedback
They say love is the evilest haha
Ah i remember when we did this track :( haha
But dont sweat about it. Cuz Im not lol
But I still love this track. I can relate to everything you say in this track Phade.
And thats..not something to brag about haha.
But dude when you get signed Im gunna b the president of your fan club! Lmfao.
And the 3rd verse is a sickening ending to this track, superb :P
Monk.
I Love You.
I would respond. But we've all talked about this already.
xD
-Phade
www.Phade.tk
Inside every cynical person, there is a disappointed idealist.
Age 31, Male
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Gotham City, PA
Joined on 10/29/07