someone else's bed u had to do it for the ladies and the gay guys lol
Diss shit is hott "widd 2 O's jus like Ohio"[weezy]
If holiday aint put his out first i could hear u on da Fm bumpin das.
Good work mane.
4.32 / 5.00 (+ 0.0091)
u had to do it for the ladies and the gay guys lol
Diss shit is hott "widd 2 O's jus like Ohio"[weezy]
If holiday aint put his out first i could hear u on da Fm bumpin das.
Good work mane.
4.32 / 5.00 (+ 0.0091)
thx mang
like i told you before
Your good jus alot of stuff to work on. But this is alot better as billy said. Jus slow down some like i told you and youll hav it on lock
Oh nd ses stfu man real talk. For i git on you.
i got u man,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
well ima give it 2 you str8
Me honestly i didnt realli like this. The beat is really hard to follow and a lil annoying to me. And then the hook was katchy but ina bad way, its kinda renimds me of the buzzing of a fly. You sounds a lil like fabalous doe.
But other than that this song was totally original and i respect you for that.
Even though the verse was too short.
Sorry for being too hard on you but if someone doesnt then you'll honestly get nowhere on newgrounds.
So Welcome to the site and check out some of my music too.
Protege
well fam this aint my beat its preview and thats the only bars i could add before the hook came back in .plus i want to show im versetile.
Ok we have offically killed it
Ok we are an offical tag team who are konsiderd kannonz!
Nd dont b hatin off tha KH samples. Dey git tha job dun!
Nd to who ever keeps '0' bombin us, HOP OFF!!!!!
Damn
Protege
Tragik
+60HP
and yet we continue with this masterpeice
Am I no mortal who takes damage/
mans the cannon/
and send whole villages into famine/
adn yet while we're standgin/
the flames/
of my bruning rage/
ignites the gauge/
and makes repeition the same/
so we stand epik/
we reckless/
you wanna come and test this?/
im the best wit an a.k/
I spray away/
n***as like its payday/
lets play/
you got the wrong room/
the bass booms/
the snares clap/
g'day/
ill tip my hat/
and ill rewind the trak/
till thebeat drops/
The original and the sequel will never flop
yea n***a!!!!
Dats how we do
what we do
when we do!
Any hataz wanna step up ta the plate and beat battle us!!!!!
We'll take onm anybody!
Even Yun ans Spawn....ok maybe not Yun and Spawn....BUT ANYBODY ELSE!!!!???
young pro this and young pro dat
I hate you n***as!
but in the good way.
You guys are the fuckkin cannons and I idolize you. But not in tha creepy gay fanboy way. Im tha homie- to -homie inspirational way.
And iGot madd pissed wen u played this in tha vent cuz wen iListen to epic shit ihave to hear it like 5-6 times before im satifyed. And you only played it only once T_T
haha.
but on to the trak.
Couldnt find anything really wrong with it.
Tha flows was on points.
Tha beat was hott.
And iGrasped a concept really quik.
And were you mimiking me in the beginnin cuz its sounds like sum shit id say.
Cuz ur ass wont EQ mah trax or gimmie any beats haha.
Fuk you
Ill Regen again!
hey your right
Our trax are the similar
we should collab sometime
or maybe even beatballte jus for the hell of it.
keep it up and good luck.
Protege
UGS
+60HP
Yea I definitely look forward to kollabing with you
Thnx for the love
u fxin suck!
Ill give you a ten though
But you still suk
and you cant beat me in a beat battle!
haha
Your gay and kick your ass you bastard so shut da hell up
I know where you live pussy
I think its a hot beat
Jus take out that one guy.
He sounds like you found a random fat guy and told him to breathe into the mic while you made this beat.
And his reward was a twinkie ^.^
lol
But your Hi-Hats try putting them in the piano roll. It helps alt bcuz they jus keep goin in goin.
Other then that this beat sounds like it was blessed by Kaliber his self
Protege
Inside every cynical person, there is a disappointed idealist.
Age 31, Male
Rapper
Gotham City, PA
Joined on 10/29/07
