we need to stay in touch
"Viral virus I'm an idol entitle your kid an orphan Homicidal no revival, recycle your vital organs"
god man ur hott
I been sleepin on you mane.
I neva listend to u.
well only one trak nd dats wen u dissd rak.
That was hott belived dat.
Nd i really like yah style.
U got a style ive been lookin 4
a lyrical type sound yet can switch to mainstream and any kick.
haha
this def goes on mah ipod mane.
Props up to you and spwn.
thanx a lot dude
oh god
what the hell is this dudes problem?
Ima tell him though personal exp. dont battle Merc. Playin around or serious cuz he will rip.
He stand no chance what so ever.
The casket is closed
the hook is fire
ooh kay mah dude
Your pretty good.
I havent checkd out numbus's diss yet but best belive ima check it out nd hit yall bak up.
but yah flow is hott, got that NY hood feel.
Real lyrical and fancy word play.
Keep it up
Q
THATS WHAT IT DO TRY THO HEAR THE BBATTLE IN ORDER THIS IS THE TRAK I DROP AFTER HIS JUMP OFF.
i overreact sometimez =\
Even though I have like no exp in this felid I like this song.
It really does sounds like something made for your son.
It got a lil repetive[gawsh i cant spell lol] but it was still good to listen too.
Nice work.
Oh and btw sorry for lashing out on ur review to my song.
I have my moments sometimes O.o
hey man, no problem at all. thanks so much for taking the time to listen and respond despite all that. that really says something about your character, i appreciated that.yea, i know it's a tad repetitive, i just knew it needed something more but couldn't put my finger on it quite yet. thanks for taking the time to review :D
u had to do it for the ladies and the gay guys lol
Diss shit is hott "widd 2 O's jus like Ohio"[weezy]
If holiday aint put his out first i could hear u on da Fm bumpin das.
Good work mane.
4.32 / 5.00 (+ 0.0091)
thx mang
like i told you before
Your good jus alot of stuff to work on. But this is alot better as billy said. Jus slow down some like i told you and youll hav it on lock
Oh nd ses stfu man real talk. For i git on you.
i got u man,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
well ima give it 2 you str8
Me honestly i didnt realli like this. The beat is really hard to follow and a lil annoying to me. And then the hook was katchy but ina bad way, its kinda renimds me of the buzzing of a fly. You sounds a lil like fabalous doe.
But other than that this song was totally original and i respect you for that.
Even though the verse was too short.
Sorry for being too hard on you but if someone doesnt then you'll honestly get nowhere on newgrounds.
So Welcome to the site and check out some of my music too.
Protege
well fam this aint my beat its preview and thats the only bars i could add before the hook came back in .plus i want to show im versetile.
hey your right
Our trax are the similar
we should collab sometime
or maybe even beatballte jus for the hell of it.
keep it up and good luck.
Protege
UGS
+60HP
Yea I definitely look forward to kollabing with you
Thnx for the love
u fxin suck!
Ill give you a ten though
But you still suk
and you cant beat me in a beat battle!
haha
Your gay and kick your ass you bastard so shut da hell up
I know where you live pussy
damn came hard
damn son, I aint goin lie, this diss came hard
The truth Hurts
Inside every cynical person, there is a disappointed idealist.
Age 30, Male
Rapper
Gotham City, PA
Joined on 10/29/07
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